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Post #46: 5th Dec 2017 9:37 PM 
HOLY SHIT!!!
Haha I didn't think I'd actually win.
Thanks for the coins guys!
Thanks for hosting Curt, it was a really fun game.

Add the mario dab hed!!!

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Post #47: 5th Dec 2017 9:59 PM 
hell is real
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Post #48: 5th Dec 2017 10:43 PM 
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Two days later

All was right in Chieftain Booda's village on the outskirts of Dingleberry Forest. The settlement had been rebuilt, General Igor has been brought down, and the remnants of the group finally celebrated Thanksgiving with a proper feast.

Curtis had been turned back into human form and him and Igor said their goodbyes to Chieftain Booda and his villagers. Jeffrey set off on his own journey of self exploration. The surviving GLBers were stuck as sloths for the rest of their lives after the witch ran out of her potion.



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The witch made the long journey back up the steep cliff and entered her shack, locking the door behind her. She quickly noticed a fire was lit in the fireplace and spun around.













































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"sup bitch" said Chris.

"Ugh, where have you been? About time you made it." the witch replied.

"did those fuckers finally stop bothering us?"

"What was left of them, yes. It worked exactly as we planned. Curtis' group and General Igor killed each other off for the most part. They had no idea of our involvement. Stage one is complete."

"but more importantly BIG BLACK FRIDAY has you and these woods allllll to himself ;) " Chris said as he disgustingly licked his beak.

The witch approached Chris and passionately held him. "That's right my love. And soon enough, when Curtis returns with a new gang, stage two will begin."

Chris and the witch laughed manically as the witch poured herself a glass of red wine, a wicked smile spread across her face...

































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The gang will return in...













































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A partner game! Coming February
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Post #49: 5th Dec 2017 10:53 PM 
Is the witch Buffy?
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Post #50: 6th Dec 2017 3:35 AM 
What an incredible journey this has been
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Post #51: 6th Dec 2017 8:38 AM 
Arguably the least expected f2. Probably the f3 even. Three people who haven’t exactly been bffs (:
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Post #52: 6th Dec 2017 8:54 AM 
Whoa

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Post #53: 6th Dec 2017 9:26 AM 
Chris was my favorite character this season
 
   
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Post #54: 6th Dec 2017 9:59 AM 
Random notes as I think of them:

- My favorite stretch of the game was the Rose-Bryce-KC feud/deaths at the end. That all played out perfectly

- Items went underused again as expected. They aren’t meant to be a big part of the games at all, just sorta there if anyone wants one. The fork stabs and slingshot at the end were amusing. Next game I might make them all cheaper overall so we see more uses out of them, most aren’t exactly worth the price

- The Witch is JJ yes. Her story was gonna be much different, I was originally gonna reveal her as a villain when you met her and she was gonna get wine drunk and transform into her alter ego and you were gonna kill her. Original plan was also to have General Igor die in the second to last course and then the witch would be revealed as the real villain and you’d fight her

- Thought for sure Igor would die early which is partially why I had you all linger around the settlement for three chapters, I wanted General Igor to be around so he could kill Igor (:

- MVP and robbed goddess award goes to Rose tbh, thought she was doing great and her Zach backstab was hilariously brutal

- Favorite challenge to run was Love Letter followed by the hexagon path game. Also loved the adopt DS one

- Favorite character to write for was General Igor

- Favorite line might’ve been when Patrick was quietly enjoying the villagers’ play and said it was one of him and his wife’s favorites. Favorite moment was maybe Jeff playing San Juniperi to sniff out worse Igor

- Original epilogue was gonna be Curtis stuck as sperm permanently and him and Jeffrey admitting their love for one another and eloping in order to set up VDay game. Story was made up entirely on the spot if you couldn’t tell

- Honest question, did you guys read the flavor or kinda just skim? It obviously is the longest part for me so I might cut it down a bit for the next one if no one really reads it. But I do like writing the stupid stories

- If you read, what was your favorite moment or line? SHARE BELOW! Not fishing for compliments, just curious to see what kinda stuff people liked for the future

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Post #55: 6th Dec 2017 10:05 AM 
I like the dialogue. Makes the characters feel pretty authentic.

Patrick and the Igors were my favorite characters. The GLB sloths were probably my favorite moment of the game.
"So, uh, what are we saying here? If we save LA from a nuclear bomb, then you and I can get together for dinner and a movie?"
   
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Post #56: 6th Dec 2017 10:07 AM 
I read 95% of the flavor. Sometimes I skip ahead if I'm getting too anxious to see who died. I don't have the self control!

GLB Village was my favorite part, and Black Friday's identity reveal
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Post #57: 6th Dec 2017 1:18 PM 
i was my favourite part

also i skipped the very small font flavour hurt my eyes and was too lazy to copy and paste to view it
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Post #58: 6th Dec 2017 1:37 PM 
Wow those were all my lines
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Post #59: 6th Dec 2017 1:41 PM 
I stopped reading when I died

Rig it for me next time
 
   
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Post #60: 6th Dec 2017 1:46 PM 
Curtis @ 6/12/2017 13:37
Wow those were all my lines

im sure they were great. here are some laughs you can apply to the ones of your choosing


LOL
hahaha
lol so funny
hehe
lmfaooo

you're welcome
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I was wrong about Jamie he is a true visionary and I name him my successor


   
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