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Bryce
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| Post #1: 30th Jan 2014 11:47 AM | |
So I know the point of this isn't to plan anything, but we're getting sloppy very fast.
We need to make sure we include a lot of people, but we can't just desperately throw names in every sentence. It started off wellish but now we're kind of just throwing things in that are leading nowhere.
I'm not suggesting we have a theme really because sometimes the randomness of things is funny, but I think we should do more groundwork right now and focus more on making it flow better instead of jumbling a bunch of names in one paragraph. | | |
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Bryce
The Butcher
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| Post #2: 30th Jan 2014 11:47 AM | |
There isn't a limit to the story so let's just make it flow. | | |
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Natalie
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| Post #3: 31st Jan 2014 10:31 AM | |
Boarding today, will try to check in when I can but my help today will be very limited. | A lesson without pain is meaningless. That's because no one can gain without sacrificing something. But by enduring that pain and overcoming it, he shall obtain a powerful, unmatched heart. A fullmetal heart. |
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Natalie
Roth
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| Post #4: 31st Jan 2014 2:48 PM | |
I probably won't be home or back on before deadline, we need to wrap this up quickish. | A lesson without pain is meaningless. That's because no one can gain without sacrificing something. But by enduring that pain and overcoming it, he shall obtain a powerful, unmatched heart. A fullmetal heart. |
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