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Pa Hupu
The Jewbear
| Reputation: 11 | Group: | Regular | Posts: | 810 | Joined: | Jun 26, 2012 |
| Post #1: 26th Nov 2013 5:29 PM | |
https://soundcloud.com/user277322160/members1
a couple months ago i recorded myself reading episode 1 of Members out of boredom. i thought it'd be FUN and while it kind of was it's also made me acutely aware of my inadequacies as a writer. so i don't know if i'll ever do another one, because they get progressively stupider. | |
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Curtis
First Place Dick
| Reputation: 1,170 | Group: | Admin | Posts: | 79,236 | Joined: | Jun 22, 2012 |
| Post #2: 26th Nov 2013 5:32 PM | |
I've waited for this moment for a long time | |
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Curtis
First Place Dick
| Reputation: 1,170 | Group: | Admin | Posts: | 79,236 | Joined: | Jun 22, 2012 |
| Post #3: 26th Nov 2013 5:37 PM | |
THAT VOICE..DAMN!!
This story is more gripping then I remembered | |
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Pa Hupu
The Jewbear
| Reputation: 11 | Group: | Regular | Posts: | 810 | Joined: | Jun 26, 2012 |
| Post #4: 26th Nov 2013 5:40 PM | |
it gets better | |
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Curtis
First Place Dick
| Reputation: 1,170 | Group: | Admin | Posts: | 79,236 | Joined: | Jun 22, 2012 |
| Post #5: 26th Nov 2013 5:42 PM | |
Are you all snacking on smores? | |
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Pa Hupu
The Jewbear
| Reputation: 11 | Group: | Regular | Posts: | 810 | Joined: | Jun 26, 2012 |
| Post #6: 26th Nov 2013 5:43 PM | |
the constant food references really surprised me. i blame my high school creative writing class always pushing us to have detail | |
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Curtis
First Place Dick
| Reputation: 1,170 | Group: | Admin | Posts: | 79,236 | Joined: | Jun 22, 2012 |
| Post #7: 26th Nov 2013 5:47 PM | |
Sunlust the bartender chatting it up with LIS at the beer forums is my favorite part | |
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Boc
| Reputation: 157 | Group: | Admin | Posts: | 19,205 | Joined: | Jun 22, 2012 |
| Post #8: 26th Nov 2013 7:05 PM | |
Your voice makes this sound like a rich piece of literature. James Earl Jones-esque | |
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Pa Hupu
The Jewbear
| Reputation: 11 | Group: | Regular | Posts: | 810 | Joined: | Jun 26, 2012 |
| Post #9: 26th Nov 2013 7:42 PM | |
new thought as i read through some more episodes: 16 year old me had prose as economical as hemingway's | |
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Henry_42
damn right son!
| Reputation: -118 | Group: | Elite | Posts: | 4,134 | Joined: | Jun 26, 2012 |
| Post #10: 27th Nov 2013 12:06 PM | |
I gotta to listen to that...some time...yup! | "There he goes. One of God's own prototypes. Some kind of high powered mutant never even considered for mass production. Too weird to live, and too rare to die."
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mal
Pronouns: they/them
| Reputation: 104 | Group: | Overlord | Posts: | 12,650 | Joined: | Jun 26, 2012 |
| Post #11: 17th Dec 2013 8:46 PM | |
lol this is gud. Makes me want to record all my old shitty fanfics. | |
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