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JJ
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| Post #1: 11th Feb 2016 7:08 PM | |
Please do not make me research historical accuracy. You guys just get it right! | | |
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JJ
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| Post #2: 16th Feb 2016 1:04 PM | |
Shorter is good! | | |
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| Post #3: 16th Feb 2016 10:17 PM | |
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| I spit out something pretty short. |
I will leave this alone. | | |
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| Post #4: 18th Feb 2016 11:45 PM | |
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| Ahh okay, I get it! I'll discuss it with Bryce later tonight, thanks for the insight Chris! :) |
You won't discuss with me? | | |
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| Post #5: 19th Feb 2016 12:28 AM | |
What is the deadline? I have yet to read anything but I trust you have all researched your historical data and I will not need to check up on you! | | |
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| Post #6: 21st Feb 2016 12:44 PM | |
I am sorry but I have been very busy and it takes a lot of time to read these. They get 5 or 6 days to write - we should get a few days to judge. :P | | |
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| Post #7: 21st Feb 2016 6:20 PM | |
Eric:
~Creativity (6/10)
~Grammar (9/10)
~Historical Accuracy (10/10)
~Consistency (10/10)
~Presentation (10/10)
It was a cute story. I do not see anything historically wrong and I took it as kind of of tongue-in-cheek. More of a comedy than historical in my opinion but still seems accurate enough.
Chris:
~Creativity (9/10)
~Grammar (9/10)
~Historical Accuracy (10/10)
~Consistency (10/10)
~Presentation (10/10)
First person again! I'll stop talking about that I guess but I do like it. I can see that the use of "fair" was cynical, and you were obviously time-jumping so I gave you all the points for historical accuracy. I thought it was very interesting and creative. And I really love JELLO, too! Good job!
Timmah? I assume but it wasn't labeled:
~Creativity (6/10)
~Grammar (10/10)
~Historical Accuracy (10/10)
~Consistency (10/10)
~Presentation (10/10)
Good job! Creativity was lowest for me just because it didn't seem like anything out of the ordinary war-time situation. Well-written and presented well!
Herm:
~Creativity (10/10)
~Grammar (9/10)
~Historical Accuracy (10/10)
~Consistency (10/10)
~Presentation (8/10)
Good job Herm! I like that the slave girl killed that jerk of a King but too bad she also had to die! :( Also, the news tablet part was funny. It was really creative and full of detail. I felt it was a little bit disjointed but still really good.
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| Post #8: 23rd Feb 2016 2:34 AM | |
Hello! Buffy > Bryce
Hopefully I did that right. | | |
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