So I know the point of this isn't to plan anything, but we're getting sloppy very fast.
We need to make sure we include a lot of people, but we can't just desperately throw names in every sentence. It started off wellish but now we're kind of just throwing things in that are leading nowhere.
I'm not suggesting we have a theme really because sometimes the randomness of things is funny, but I think we should do more groundwork right now and focus more on making it flow better instead of jumbling a bunch of names in one paragraph. | There isn't a limit to the story so let's just make it flow. |