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Post #61: 30th Jan 2016 2:16 AM 
Boc, Curtis, Rose, Buffy, Vic, Nofo and KC decided to be lame and not submit a story. So, you guys have been exterminated from the competition... Never to see the day of light again.

Okay, now that we have that out of the way. I had intended the first round to root out the inactives, whilst still letting someone be eliminated who did submit a story... As for that, the rules have now changed due to the vast amount of people who got exterminated. So, instead of their being an elimanation, we'll instead give out free points for the next round!!

Last place: 1 point
2nd to last: 2 points
Etc, etc.

So your performance this round will still play an impact in your next rounds performance. Just to even out the fact that noone will be elimanated tomorrow.

So, rejoice on that fact. Thanks for the ones who did put their time and effort in making a story!!
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Post #62: 30th Jan 2016 6:25 PM 
I think ATTWS and related stuff took some time away from some people.

That said, looking forward to the results.
 
   
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Post #63: 30th Jan 2016 6:30 PM 
I realized that I'd have to drop either way if I had made it past a round. Boc and I do so much writing for ATTWS and it takes up our whole night. Sry Miko!
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Post #64: 30th Jan 2016 6:33 PM 
I do like that we were exterminated rather than eliminated lol

Ps- I told you I had to drop :p
 
   
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Post #65: 30th Jan 2016 6:44 PM 
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Post #66: 30th Jan 2016 10:05 PM 
Timmah's Story+


Personal opinion: I really like it, besides it feeling a bit too much like The Wheel of Time, or atleast a Jordan/Sanderson creation, it was a really entertaining read. The first half reminded me a bit of the Divergent initiation, but I bet that was unintentional. :p.

The second chapter didn't feel complete whatsoever, so that is kind of a bummer. It's traditional fantasy, so nothing to innovative, which can't be expected with a short story, so I like it. The ending really made me want to continue reading. Overall a strong story.

Personal rating:

~Creativity (7/10)
~Grammar (8/10)
~Scope (5/10)
~Consistency (7/10)
~Presentation (6/10)


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Post #67: 30th Jan 2016 10:12 PM 
Brian's Story~ Trouble in Tanule+


Wow Brian, you got me to laugh with those last 2 sentances. Haha, I did not see that coming. I appreciate the poem approach, though it won't get you the most points. You didn't feel attached to the characters, and if it weren't for the 'dragon', it would be full on comedy. So I don't know how I'm supposed to feel about that, I did enjoy though, so there's that.

~Creativity (3/10)
~Grammar (6/10)
~Scope (2/10)
~Consistency (7/10)
~Presentation (3/10)


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Post #68: 30th Jan 2016 10:24 PM 
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You admittely said you didn't finish it. But considering you still submitted something, and it's somewhat complete I'll still judge it. Since that last sentence could have been the ending, though extremely short.

I like the writing style, espicially in the beginning. You were aiming towards something, I was curious to find out what. But considering this is an incomplete story I can't say much more about it.

~Creativity (4/10)
~Grammar (7/10)
~Scope (5/10)
~Consistency (6/10)
~Presentation (4/10)

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Post #69: 30th Jan 2016 10:36 PM 
Dylan's Story+


As you stated, it felt more like a prologue to a story. Very traditional fantasy, which isn't bad. I really liked the world you had built with the floating lands, and other species, it was pretty fascinating, wish he had explored it a bit more. But who knows, you may revisit it in future stories. ;)

Generally I really liked it, and it would have easily brought you on to the next round even if we didn't have all these exterminated players.

~Creativity (7/10)
~Grammar (8/10)
~Scope (7/10)
~Consistency (7/10)
~Presentation (4/10)
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Post #70: 30th Jan 2016 10:44 PM 
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Post #71: 30th Jan 2016 10:49 PM 
FUCK!!

Don't judge me!!
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Post #72: 30th Jan 2016 11:08 PM 
Eric's Story~ Lamentaire+


I like this story! Alot! I love the fact that you used mythology as an aspect as well, their was a lot of thought put into this, and felt like a full story, kind of like The Eye of the World, but a sequel would be welcome, which came with The Great Hunt (and the 12 other ones). I really like it Eric, great job!

~Creativity (9/10)
~Grammar (8/10)
~Scope (7/10)
~Consistency (7/10)
~Presentation (5/10)
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Post #73: 30th Jan 2016 11:16 PM 
Keeping the most visibly dedicated player for last. :)
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Post #74: 30th Jan 2016 11:19 PM 
Oh yeah, I forgot to mention this but Badger has decided to step out of the competition. (S)He did write half a story, but decided to still step out anyways. So Badger, you will have the honor of being eliminated instead of exterminated considering you atleast tried making a story.
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Post #75: 30th Jan 2016 11:22 PM 
Miko @ 31/1/2016 5:16
Keeping the most visibly dedicated player for last. :)

Thank you, been a blast reading everyone's stories.
 
   
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